{"id":68,"date":"2006-02-01T23:56:02","date_gmt":"2006-02-02T04:56:02","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/devinreams.com\/2006\/02\/01\/bloggers-write-too-much\/"},"modified":"2006-02-01T23:56:02","modified_gmt":"2006-02-02T04:56:02","slug":"bloggers-write-too-much","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordpress.reams.me\/?p=68","title":{"rendered":"Bloggers Write Too Much"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Dear Bloggers,<\/p>\n<p>Many of you (including yours truly) write too much!<\/p>\n<p>I want to point you to A List Apart which wrote on &#8216;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.alistapart.com\/articles\/writebetter\/\">How to Write a Better Blog<\/a>&#8216; back in 2002. A number of bloggers write like &#8216;amateurs&#8217;. I don&#8217;t mean that literally, that&#8217;s just how the article labels these individuals.<\/p>\n<p>I think we can all agree there is almost too much content to keep up with. I submit that we all do each other a favor and become more aware of our own writing styles.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Declarative sentences are good. Web readers demand pith.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Steve Rubel is <em>very<\/em> good at blogging. If everyone emulated his style I could get through my feeds a hundred times faster and absorb a thousand times more content. For example, see how long it takes to read the following:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Pheedo <a title=\"http:\/\/www.prweb.com\/releases\/2006\/2\/prweb339591.htm\" href=\"http:\/\/www.prweb.com\/releases\/2006\/2\/prweb339591.htm\">launched a new RSS  ad unit<\/a> that displays PR Web press releases. In other words, press releases  &#8211; dressed up as ads &#8211; are coming to an RSS feed near you. (<a href=\"http:\/\/feeds.feedburner.com\/MicroPersuasion?m=2933\">Micro Persuasion<\/a>)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>By the end of that second sentence I know <em>everything<\/em> I need to know. If I really want to get more information I&#8217;d either read on, click the link, or do both. Steve is a very good writer (good thing, given his job) and is very good at getting to the point.<\/p>\n<p>Short-and-sweet is easier to do when creating news-like entries, but what about in-depth original content? Well, Seth Godin is an amazingly concise, yet extrmely insightful writer:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Human beings respond to emergencies. It&#8217;s easy to get everyone to take action if  we&#8217;re in the middle of some sort of security crisis&#8230; but fixing the  educational system isn&#8217;t going to happen. (<a href=\"http:\/\/sethgodin.typepad.com\/seths_blog\/2006\/02\/a_million_littl.html\">Seth&#8217;s Blog<\/a>)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Again, these sentences are quick and to the point. There is no dancing around with extra descriptions and examples. This makes reading his blog extremely useful.<\/p>\n<p>I hate to say this, but when a post from <a href=\"http:\/\/businesslogs.com\/\">Business Logs<\/a> shows up I often ignore it. Their entires are great, don&#8217;t get me wrong. A full page of words is hard to read though. For example, the following:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;I&#8217;m a little torn here, so I&#8217;m in need of some good comment-based advice ? it&#8217;s  regarding my impending purchase of a laptop, or should I say, a palm-top.&#8221; (<a href=\"http:\/\/businesslogs.com\/technology\/nokia_770_instead_of_a_laptop.php\">Business Logs<\/a>)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>&#8230;could quickly become:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;I need some advice regarding a laptop (or should I say palm-top) purchase.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Mike, no offense, I too have found myself saying more than I need to.<\/p>\n<p>I also found a post the other day that seemed to drag on. I wanted to find out about how to make my PC look like OSX. The following:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;To make a long story short, I love the fluidity of the Frutiger font family, so I tried (unsuccessfully) to snag the Frutiger Next type face. I did, however, manage to snag the original version of Frutiger, which I don&#8217;t think you&#8217;re supposed to be able to get without a license. Believe it or not, I got the font courtesy of Microsoft, simply because they bundle the font with <a href=\"http:\/\/www.microsoft.com\/reader\/downloads\/default.asp\">Microsoft Reader<\/a>.&#8221; (<a href=\"http:\/\/www.pearsonified.com\/2006\/01\/xp_boringmod_your_pc.html\">pearsonified<\/a>)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>&#8230;is really just saying:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;I looked for Frutiger Next because I love the fluidity of the Frutiger font family. I guess you don&#8217;t need a license for Frutiger becuase I snagged it via the Microsoft Reader.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Like I said, I don&#8217;t mean to offend, Chris. My point is, I&#8217;m less likely to subscribe to (or read) paragraphs of &#8216;stream of consciousness&#8217; (but I did try out <a href=\"http:\/\/osx.portraitofakite.com\/\">FlyakiteOSX<\/a>; thanks for the pointer!).<\/p>\n<p>I could go on highlighting long-winded individuals but I think the point has been made. A little bit of editing could go a long way&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>Keep in mind I&#8217;m not trying to be as constructive as it may seem. I&#8217;m selfishly asking people to get to the point so I have more time to read my long-winded accounting textbooks&#8230; ;-)<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Dear Bloggers, Many of you (including yours truly) write too much! I want to point you to A List Apart which wrote on &#8216;How to Write a Better Blog&#8216; back in 2002. A number of bloggers write like &#8216;amateurs&#8217;. I don&#8217;t mean that literally, that&#8217;s just how the article labels these individuals. 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